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Old 09-02-2013, 04:28 AM   #2
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This was cool, content carried the piece an the flow backed it but I felt it was a bit simple at times an could be reworded to help express the apathetic parts more an even make it flow better with stronger rhymes. Not bad tho bruh just tryna help, keep droppin man
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