plot.
man did good work with aesthetics style..captured it completely. that all of over the place feeling I fet when I read his drops...the coming back from an abstract place and then coming back to a more literal place type of feell...you captured all of that..the sporadic nature to his word choice was onpoint... I mean nothing really to complain about this piece except the story felt empty a bit...I think most this week got tangled in the style copying and left the story to the back burners...still a dope verse bro.
aesthetic.
this felt like your own...I don't know if that makes sense..you took some elses style and made it fit to your writing..it seems easy how you did that..but the danger of your verse is that it feels like your style...but improved...do you understand where im coming from? the sporadic feeling is gone..the verse seems focused and carries that focus through out the entire piece..dope shit aesthetic..prolly one of the best pieces ive read from you...
mike.
duke this was solid shit...your flow is the smoothest of the entire league..you herd it here first brah..lol moving on..you chose to go with aesthetic aswell..but the difference I noticed about yours and plots verse is..you added that comical feel to your verse..as those metaphors are a bit over the top...a comedic route definitely eased the landing of each. you did great with the task and I felt like you had a good thing going...
overall..
hmmm another hard one...must be a porno.
but yo..I think plot and mike are tied here..i thought plot did and excellent job imitating aesthetics style..while mike did the same. I felt both captured different elements of the style..but in the end I think Mike showed a bit more..right down to the grammar use...I think the little things mike did one his this battle...great read from all three tho.
mike.
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