cake.
I thought you did an excellent job with the challenge...you executed the subject to the T..you copied defy's style right down to the bold and centered...but about that...just my opinion...I thought it was pointless to do that to be honest as it didn't add to the story nor did make the style jump out at me...its simply preference, is it part of the actual style of his WRITING? dunno..might be part of his overall style and boarding habits...but not the actual writing..bleh just something I thought id point out. I liked this though... but at times it felt you where just taking shots at his style...but I guess mocking is also a form of imitation...a mean spirited one lol...good shit cake.
Defy.
your verse is tricky..this whole fucking week is tricky...you had cake and you chose you copy the style he was using for that collab..which is vulgars style..now cake was imitating vulgar...one voter said you did a good job with cakes part but bad with vulgars part...but to me that's just extra for me to read...I focused on the verse that pertained to cake...you seemed to capture the style he used nicely...I can tell you can adjust your writing to suit any style...dope ish forreal..
overall
tbh I have no clue who to vote for...cake solid as always but I thought he over did it with the bold and all that...plus the mocking sense this gives off makes me believe cake didn't really take this shit seriously and took the opportunity to take shots lol.
Quote:
There's no rush like extermination mixed with auto-erotic asphyxiation/
Because then I can't waste your time with text based on my phonic limitations/
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lol^^
but then defy imitated cake imitating vulgar..and I thought he did a dam good job at it..so whats more impressive? cakes brilliant mockery or defy's effort? im not sure. on one hand I think defy did a dope job with the example he was givin..good battle but I gotta with defy.
I mean the guy imitated cake imitating vulgar...that's gotta be worth something..atleast one vote.
defy.