[Mike Wrecka]

cool battle gentlemen

pancake - you took the approach of writing a verse as if you were defy. or at least your impression of who defy is. that was a really good way to tackle this assignment and it worked wonderfully. what you did before this battle took place was to create defy gravity into a character, dropping alot of posts about how he is some emo suicidal type of person. i have no idea if its true or not but you created a perception of that among voters that you were then able to take full advantage of. it was genius tbh.
ok on to the verse

My veins suffocate a navy color, they run down my wrist with a babbling sound
The azure blue reminds me of some deep ocean where I could haphazardly drown

that line is beautiful. the multi works perfectly and the imagery is incredible. i can picture someone staring at their wrist seeing the blue and comparing the color to the color of a deep ocean.

I'm my own king and with my body I can do acts so senselessly cruel
Like erudite tongue laps around the razor marks; I'm in a sensational mood

no idea what erudite means. but it sounds cool as fuck. and what a creative way to basically say this guy is a cutter and or just cut his own wrist

the rest were dope lines as well. you kept it dark and light hearted at the same time. using the Bejeweled line would seem ridiculous but it worked so well here. the asphyxiation line was right at home. you really created a vibe of someone that is emo depressed. almost like its trendy to be depressed in this persons mind. fantastic job fella


defy gravity - you decided to imitate a verse by vulgar imitating pancake. i like the concept tbh. reminds me of Robert Downey in Tropic Thunder. he is a real life white american actor, playing an Australian actor that is playing a black actor. i love that performance. and he plays the black guy like an australian white guy would. Here you imitated Pancakebrah, as Vulgar did. you imitated vulgar imitating pancake. my head is spinning and i like it. you also directly mocked cake quite a bit. which i thought was appropriate based on your guys recent interactions. to the verse

it was a long verse. you had alot of gems in there.

What would you do during an invasion in our proximity?
Bitch I would.... (The rest was edited out for lack of positivity)PB

referencing him editing posts in the positivity thread. you have been paying attention i see. good line

You're beneath me and I must single you out or something similar
Seemingly against the peace treaty as I brandish your accomplishments in my signature

lmao. that line is gold. used it against him. see you didnt need to create a character of pancake, you used real stuff. because to be frank he is quite a character so you had lots of ammo on a persona to mimic.

ill be honest im a bit confused, because what i have posted so far looks alot like an imitation of pancakes style i guess. its certainly not vulgars style. but then you write vulgars verse which is the start of the pancake imitation in that piece. so im a little lost as to what the first half was. and tbh i didnt really like that whole section. you would have been better off without it. u weaved some good celebrity references in there. but it while it was creative it didnt wow me.

good battle guys. i enjoyed it. pancake dropped what i see as close to a perfect verse content and structure wise. it was short but not in a bad way.

defy did a good job here. he had a good verse that could have been better if he edited out some lines. i enjoyed his verse though. didnt have the flow or structure of cakes though. he was on the right track but lacked the consistency of brah

this was closer than it seemed but cake gets my vote

vote - Pancakebrah