[Lost in Thought]

I vote nigma, I don't really know the others style well to say he did a good imitation however, after reading its kind of clear lol.


The task at hands to match the stuff you struggle to handle
The trouble with that, I've done it but I'm humble in action
To sum it quick I'm lappin past the trash of an amateur
I want none of it, like the last expansion of Candada
-don't really know the knowledge behind the last expansion of Canada***
however i'm guess E did his research and the last expansion of Canada was land no one else wanted? if so good line. lol

Take a straight gaze at the path, don't day break around Afrika
Date raping giraffes with the pack of beta apes thats attractin ya
-like the animal biology here :P and the transition included with switching from Canada to afrika and Africa's being connected to the animals he stated and known for some of its wild life

Damn, it's like ya summoned from a dungeon how you creep up the steps
You think you're something but you're nothing.. The Placebo Effect
-HAH! nice. need I explain?

I'm the type to write a section reminding men of all 5 they senses
And then say try to test like the mindset of a tribal medic
-eh
Spewing the facts of life, you only true when the task is dying
Knew he had passed his prime so I threw him on past horizons
Viewing the crashing site and the beauty it catalyzes
Too much moving, we act in signs like students of acting
Commuting through hands and smiles like Nubian pantomimers
Inhale fumes till I catch on fire in a rapture minded stature
I am choosing the last survivor with the catch-a-liar method
Your task, to draft a writing on the master of fire..
- liked the internals and multi's. end had some zing

If I was there I'd say that I'm a cleric of the of newer ages
Barrels full of silver seein werewolves in the lunar rays, the
Tarots cards are truthful, pay off the tariffs for my rule breaking
Tearing human brains I'm like a Pharaoh in a tomb awakened
-I'm not sure I like the beginning of the last line, maybe lacking the knowledge to understand it, but the end of it was hot and the whole like could have been delieverd very nicely if the start was worked on

Scarin them like half a page will contract AIDS and get cancer
I'm a black mage on the Sabbath, the last days of a rapture
A man trained as assassin, I'm Max Payne with a cannon
Land, wait, and inhabit.. The whole planets alarmed!
Grown, planted, and farmed in our botanical garden
-internals nice kinda of a bit everywhere w/ this stanza lol. from religion to assassins max pain and biology and the planet. lol. read well and flowed but maby needed to be a bit more focused. lots of imagery tho

It don't matter, regardless you'll be cloning my figure
A poets only limits what he knows and can deliver
-felt you shoulda expanded more on the first lines concept, none the less the second line was a tight concept in itself. I fail to see the connection, but could be my perception.

If you hold that inner wisdom let it grow before you pick it
-had some good depth and a nice simile
If your goal is to persistently bring growth to all your writtens
But you're focusing on winning, only know you'll never get it

Pathetic, they saying that all I do is flow?
Yeah, in my writtens it's potent
But that simple shit you quote
Is just a ripple in my ocean
-it is wat it is and is stated in the lines lol

And I've grown so bitter cold that it's the only shit I'm holding
When emotion grips my shoulder and it lifts me from this coma
It is youthful food for thought, I'm like a gypsy with ambrosia
When the seconds stem from minutes and the gimmick scene is closing
Hope you scribbled in some notes cause you will miss me when it's over
So I'm always solitary and alone the poems can rescue me
Boatloads of the recipe, coke-nosed to suppress the beef
-ehish... liked this last line
Patron, smoke, and some ecstasy, my own soul is repressing me
Own homes at the depths and I'm stone cold like it's wrestling
-nice pun ;)
Before I let them in on my perception of investment,
I'ma end the clip like men before the credits of a western flick

I guess it's just a...

Limit breaker, switch the pace from basic to phase two
And if you want to imitate my style, I don't blame you
-nice we to bring in the TOPIC of the week into a nice flex


Overall great verse man keep doing your thing