YDK i like your stuff usually. this just didnt work for me tbh. the end rhymes were kinda weak. some didnt really rhyme perfectly and some didnt rhyme at all. it seemed very personal though which is why you might have just said fuck the structure and flow i just wanna get this out.
i usually dont give negative feedback in the OM but i read this and its so far below your usual stuff i thought id hit you with some truth. i look forward to the next one.
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