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Old 08-30-2013, 03:15 AM   #2
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Really strong closer here, loved it. I see wat you meant about creating more of a backdrop serpent, the flow was good for the most part but a couple lines killed me cuz it felt like it was lacking a word to keep the flow like the chasing ladies exhausting line. Content was strong tho an I liked the second stanza for the multies but the third was my favorite because it felt the most complete technically speaking an maintained the strong content.
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