Really strong closer here, loved it. I see wat you meant about creating more of a backdrop serpent, the flow was good for the most part but a couple lines killed me cuz it felt like it was lacking a word to keep the flow like the chasing ladies exhausting line. Content was strong tho an I liked the second stanza for the multies but the third was my favorite because it felt the most complete technically speaking an maintained the strong content.
Good shit fellas keep droppin
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