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Mr. J · 08-29-2013, 02:49 PM

This was nice for a key the lyricism is here
but it needed more polish to be mind blowing
not taking away from it bit ypu know you could do better

08-29-2013, 02:49 PM	#6
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was nice for a key the lyricism is here but it needed more polish to be mind blowing not taking away from it bit ypu know you could do better __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you