Bleak....You came alright i mean your concepts were nice. but your wording didnt have much impact....The battlship was your best attempt to me but 'sinking his battleship' isnt really hard imo
Sharp was consistent imo....Getting WAY better with his bars....The opener was decent made me laugh first downs was pretty dope wording was a bit off....overall really decent verse bro...keep at it cause your goina be a threat
V/Sharp
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