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Old 08-27-2013, 08:29 PM   #3
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not too bad bruh but stop with the k's aint nobody here gonna bang wit ya for using a c cuz lmao
overall it flowed good an had decent content but the rhymes were kinda simple and the topic itself has been done a ton of times, not to say you dont have a different take or opinion on it but it wasnt conveyed as well as you could have. not bad at all though just could use a little rewording for stronger emotional output and rhymeschemes.
keep droppin bruh
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