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Old 08-24-2013, 08:01 PM   #2
Defy Gravity
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These Internet geeks like to dishonor
my literary piece
They try to run it into the obituary,
I'm invincible freaks



good flow. are you speaking on certain people?



My verses have purpose at least, all
of ya worship me
Subliminal message? Most certainly
i'm converting ya
Your becoming a fan with every damn
word I'm serving ya



worship doesnt go with this and makes the previous line stretched. the rest is average



Any previous preconceived plan was
just murdered brah


I see you flowing every three lines



You obviously have heard of me
asserting my skills verbally
Herdaling syllables at terminal
speeds, I germinate steeze
Divert the hate, turn it into hurt and
aim it at your knees



cool flow the lines wasn't all that





Cuz if your coming at me your playing
jaws in merky waters
Why bother? If you've seen the movie
you'd know I slaughter


average





Choppin emcees into mince meat,
ending careers quickly
I'll be the goat to live on forever, I
boast my flow is sickly



back to two line flowing




Oh? This bragadocio ish isn't a
perfect fit to your standards?
Where are my manners? Fuck you. I
think I can manage
Half of you giving advice and can't
even use a mic to advantage




average drop. not bad but not horrible
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