These Internet geeks like to dishonor
my literary piece
They try to run it into the obituary,
I'm invincible freaks
good flow. are you speaking on certain people?
My verses have purpose at least, all
of ya worship me
Subliminal message? Most certainly
i'm converting ya
Your becoming a fan with every damn
word I'm serving ya
worship doesnt go with this and makes the previous line stretched. the rest is average
Any previous preconceived plan was
just murdered brah
I see you flowing every three lines
You obviously have heard of me
asserting my skills verbally
Herdaling syllables at terminal
speeds, I germinate steeze
Divert the hate, turn it into hurt and
aim it at your knees
cool flow the lines wasn't all that
Cuz if your coming at me your playing
jaws in merky waters
Why bother? If you've seen the movie
you'd know I slaughter
average
Choppin emcees into mince meat,
ending careers quickly
I'll be the goat to live on forever, I
boast my flow is sickly
back to two line flowing
Oh? This bragadocio ish isn't a
perfect fit to your standards?
Where are my manners? Fuck you. I
think I can manage
Half of you giving advice and can't
even use a mic to advantage
average drop. not bad but not horrible
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Originally Posted by zygote
Hopefully without offending anybody, Defy Gravity has created the most impressive initial submission from a new user to join the competition. Outperformed his opponent in terms of rhyme scheme
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