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Old 01-21-2013, 12:20 PM   #10
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I liked the Columbus line.

Some of it was too wordy. I tend to read everything like a rap song and this was very poetic, avant-garde, even Anticon-ish, in a way. Sometimes you need not be so overly wordy and work on the basics. Being a little bit more simple to get your meaning across. For the audience here, it was good though.
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