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Old 08-23-2013, 08:46 PM   #13
Defy Gravity
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This is Norwegian Wood. Feel the
violin undulating
The strings so underestimated. I’m
feeling violent.
And the color violet is all I see after
it’s souls decimated.

decent I don't know what undulating is


I feel better about yourself already.
Reading the instructions to this do-
it-yourself machete.

this is dope as fuck


The annointed king of pointy things. I
exist, so you know you aren’t above
me.
Mymonsters handcuffed. Behind
bars. Do you want me?

great follow up





The ultimate scenario. Not even
slightly unfocused.
Unzip your skin-tights with my opus.
Inform you of it.
When you look down, get hit right in
the forehead.


great word play




Sit tight. Fellatiate. My salamander
while you salivate. The master
I want to be the reason you drink.


This feelings n’sync.
And there ain’t a lake full of timber
the could ignite the embers, I think.
Of course you look up to me.
In a
naked portrait of myself you’d quit.
Exaggerate my abdomen
Accentuate the crevices. Give me a 12
pack. Extenuate. I’m extra masculine


I don't know where each rhyme begin and end. cool concept and execution. tons of pop references. I like it
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Hopefully without offending anybody, Defy Gravity has created the most impressive initial submission from a new user to join the competition. Outperformed his opponent in terms of rhyme scheme
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