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Old 08-22-2013, 05:27 PM   #6
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Baron.. i remember you... we didn't get along back in the day... way back in the day... this was great though... i always did appreciate your style. Flow was great and your wording was pretty well developed. I went and looked in the league and saw this was under some specific league verse task and you followed that well. The comparison of the farmer to the commercial giant was good... i've seen that before, but you did it in a different way then I've seen it before. Fine print details... interesting and entertaining twist. nicely done like usual...
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