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PiE · 08-22-2013, 07:41 AM

I liked the start and the finish, which is odd cuz alot of the middle, I want to fond of. I like thyme flow in verses and this had a different kind of spoken word kind of flow, but I got into that with this piece.. you did it pretty well.

08-22-2013, 07:41 AM	#5
PiE el es a la mode Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: slice of heaven Posts: 94 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	I liked the start and the finish, which is odd cuz alot of the middle, I want to fond of. I like thyme flow in verses and this had a different kind of spoken word kind of flow, but I got into that with this piece.. you did it pretty well. __________________