Hmm seen alot better from you chap. Your rhyme scheme was weak at the start then improved alot as you moved on. Ironically its usually the other way round for niggas.
Wasnt a huge fan of the topic etc but still it was a nice read. There were some real highlights for me in this drop
- comprising shocks of literacy, the dalai lama wasn't fit to read
psychotic hints of sicker keys, in sonic mixed wit cinder speed
and
- preaching to the choir only to be reminded, preachers lying to be hired is practiced, chill
Keep it up - Nice work
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