Got to agree with Lars in most cases - I liked the ideas but the content was totally lost on me, didn't really understand the points being made if any or what you were doing other then jumping from one referrence to the next.
As for the flow it was really good but really hard work. Took me about several reads to nail down what I assume is how you wanted it read.
Was a good piece but I fear will be lost on many here fam.
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