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Eŋg · 08-21-2013, 07:28 PM

i thought first stanza was okish. then you sort of lost of me but i did read it all the way through. that spell-out line was gai af. don't do that. and i think disgrauding is disregarding? or something. idk. write sober.

pz

08-21-2013, 07:28 PM	#3
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	i thought first stanza was okish. then you sort of lost of me but i did read it all the way through. that spell-out line was gai af. don't do that. and i think disgrauding is disregarding? or something. idk. write sober. pz