Hi...
Smh @ Plot...
I got them dope lines, bringing them punches is my duty fool
My verse's crack, your more like a twerk vid from 2 beautiful
Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look
The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book
How u gon come first with this simple shit, make it more interestin
Even if The plot thickened, hed still be comin in for seconds
What a faggot tho , hes the gayest nigga here by far
So many nigga cummin at him, he mustve wrote that control verse for lamar
Ive seen the opener/kendrick lines before but i liked yours too...
If youre going to do current events try not use reference material that is too easy or too obvious...
climax was dope...
Never seen your stuff before but you did well...
Vote- Malachi...
Bye...
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