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CopyPat · 08-20-2013, 04:32 AM

well after my ears fully heal i will listen to your next one...

haha. dude the quality of this is straight ASS.. i gotta tell u

im not sure if this is ur First audio????? if it is im super impressed with how u rode the beat and didn't spit ur shit monotone like alot of first timers do. the rhyming and breath control etc everything was really good man, also well done to actually write 3 different verses for one track... its more daunting then people think

soonly thing i have a problem with was the actual audio quality. there were parts that just completely muted out. no beat or anything. like a blank part in the track... so honestly thats brutal. beyond that it was suuuuuuuuper tinny(not tiny) and all you could hear was treble. i am not sure of your technique in making this but it almost sounded like u recorded the beat off ur computer speakers with the same mic u used to spit ur verse to and then mixed it?? might be why it just has no depth and waaaay to sharp. also the beat was really loud and ur vocals were too quiet. u def have to have a an actual mp3 version of the beat and record ur acapella separately while listening to the beat in ur headphones and then mix them together. once u record urself over the beat ur fucked. or if u record the beat with a mic ur fucked too... u lose ALL the depth. no highs or lows in the beat.

anyways man. again. if its first time. it is what it is... this happens to basically every texter that moves to audio.you have great lyrics but need to work at making a song sound proper. like i said the good things u have already going for u are a huge bonus, so i'de say ur ahead of the curve in ur actual mcing but u just need ur production to be alot better. better yet like i say get the beat, record ur verses and then maybe even send em to somebody that is good at that typa shit to put it all together for u.. thats what i try to do whenever possible haha

hope that helps man!!!
glad to see someone else drop an audio. stay at it man and keep writing EVERYTHING to beats.. it will pay off in the end when u have tons of material u can just put to any beat u want

08-20-2013, 04:32 AM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	well after my ears fully heal i will listen to your next one... haha. dude the quality of this is straight ASS.. i gotta tell u im not sure if this is ur First audio????? if it is im super impressed with how u rode the beat and didn't spit ur shit monotone like alot of first timers do. the rhyming and breath control etc everything was really good man, also well done to actually write 3 different verses for one track... its more daunting then people think soonly thing i have a problem with was the actual audio quality. there were parts that just completely muted out. no beat or anything. like a blank part in the track... so honestly thats brutal. beyond that it was suuuuuuuuper tinny(not tiny) and all you could hear was treble. i am not sure of your technique in making this but it almost sounded like u recorded the beat off ur computer speakers with the same mic u used to spit ur verse to and then mixed it?? might be why it just has no depth and waaaay to sharp. also the beat was really loud and ur vocals were too quiet. u def have to have a an actual mp3 version of the beat and record ur acapella separately while listening to the beat in ur headphones and then mix them together. once u record urself over the beat ur fucked. or if u record the beat with a mic ur fucked too... u lose ALL the depth. no highs or lows in the beat. anyways man. again. if its first time. it is what it is... this happens to basically every texter that moves to audio.you have great lyrics but need to work at making a song sound proper. like i said the good things u have already going for u are a huge bonus, so i'de say ur ahead of the curve in ur actual mcing but u just need ur production to be alot better. better yet like i say get the beat, record ur verses and then maybe even send em to somebody that is good at that typa shit to put it all together for u.. thats what i try to do whenever possible haha hope that helps man!!! glad to see someone else drop an audio. stay at it man and keep writing EVERYTHING to beats.. it will pay off in the end when u have tons of material u can just put to any beat u want __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.