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Old 08-19-2013, 03:46 AM   #6
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I, too, have a slight fear every time I have sex that I will accidentally impregnate the woman I am penetrating. (It's about the only positive side effect of my recent dry spell.)

Anyway, that was my takeaway from this verse. Maybe I'm reading into it what I wanted to, but this section seemed to be about that:

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Pregnant with blood, I’m wondering when’s the next obligation
You haven’t seen a man change so fast overnight since Vegas sex alterations
If it’s any consolation, I’ve got Nefertiti’s ovary in a ruptured steel contraption
So I can access birth canals when I fucking feel like it, captain
Children don’t phase me, but the blood of a clawed beast makes me feel sickly
They set bear traps for me, I made sure that species went extinct real quickly
I liked that you relaxed a bit on this one. It was very loosely written in contrast to your usual density. I didn't even miss a single allusion. The flow wavered at times, even though the rhyme scheme didn't. This seemed like something you wanted to get off your chest, albeit indirectly.

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