Nik- Really liked the first couplet. Multis and content were good there. The rest of content was solid...nothing spectacular but for a key, above average. Multis were strong throughout. I'm not a big fan of starting the next line with the previous lines multi but that's just a small preference thing. Nice job.
Gay boy-
Your first 8 were dope. Packed with multis. Content in those lines were solid. Even tho it could be considered the set up I really liked the Rick James line. Line 8 was dope too. Then...your laziness kicked in. How you ended it was dumb.
If Bags would've ended his verse like the rest he would've won. But I gotta give it to Nik for consistency.
Last edited by Cashius; 08-18-2013 at 11:46 PM.
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