[Urban Dialect]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

Listening. The vocal mix is off, should be higher. I know you're just starting out so that'll come with time. Some choppiness/skipped beats. Same thing.

Lyrics were cool. The end of the second verse was kind of hard to understand/ran together. Third verse was the best, although I thought 'poisonous germs' was kind of forced. Not sure about the gruff delivery for a track like this.

Overall a good start.

pretty much agree w/him