Black hasn't lost his touch, eh? I dug the multis, they were sick. I also liked how the rhyme scheme skipped around there for a second, it threw it off just right to keep you from getting lost in it. You had some super quotable lines, but I think the first dude to critique this beat me to the punch. Last comment: it seems you toned down a bit on the braggadocio. Its refreshing, and it really makes your skill level stand out that much more. It makes me want to get back into this sort of thing, but I don't know if I could put something together of this caliber anymore, lol.
Anyway, awesome job.
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