[Geno]

A different view into the nikas mind.

This is a little more abstract than what I'm used to from you. Felt very random and like you just were really going off of the instinct to write with no direction. Last few lines were where I felt like you started to gain a real momentum into something and then it ends.

house warming gifts include cherry flavored pie & a favor pried which dictator’s shy? appetite for destruction while the waitercries look up at the creator’s sky, I cloned his tree for a greater high I got a sailor’s eye, fishing forcomplimentsin a seaof verbs I’ve seen you stirred, my writing mood’s over so I’ll free the words

That shit was my fav segment. The rest felt like a slow descriptive start leading up to a hotter and more abruptly ended climax. Should went in further imo

Good read, nika