metaphors or a slew of linear coordinate cues
to reorient the normative views, rhyme orbital loops
around disorder to prove there's nothing formula-proof
corporate pursuits, money ordering troops. private exchanges
illuminate the Serpent's eyes like diamond engagements
silver knuckles certified, Michael tyson in paper print
ideas ancient as Iliad. Iller than all your top 5 Homer-sapiens
^^^^^dope shit
this was a great show of flow usage as well as rhyming technique
seemed very fluid to me, the vibe was on point, that popping some sly shit shit...
very nice work in my eyes my dude, really can't critique a sick piece
keep writing
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