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Originally Posted by Vulgar
Dope
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Very insightful...
Jeez, is this guy just TOO good to critique or something?
Last thing I'll say, because I know my opinion isn't respected much here... but if there was a hierarchy for what makes good text...
It might go:
1) Concepts/Creativity
2) Word Play/Similes/Metaphor
3) Flow/Wording
However, Audio might be:
1) Cadence(flow)/wording
2) Voice/Presence
3) Wordplay/metaphors etc
4) concepts/message
Just my 2 cents... I thought it was dope too, don't get me wrong. I DEFINITELY see some room for improvement though.
edit: @
nO gOoD!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=jkA4lnsIqKE