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Old 08-17-2013, 11:41 AM   #7
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Nig - Keystle son. A adopted adult who watches figures die around him, accepting and forgiving and loving those before they pass. Flow was on and off, mostly on but a 2 bars didn't have the best end rhymes in the world. Very short verse, hard to comment on further. I assume you wanted to show so you didn't get zero points, but as its keyed not the most thought provoking verse, esspecially if I consider the standards I hold you to.

Red - solid story, nothing special but win worthy. Solid charcter build up, a bit of a lost art. Good flow, nothing really stands out in this verse bro. Its not bad, but its not ground breaking. Just enough for the win

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