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Certain Serpent, thanks for the feedback sir, glad you liked what we be cookin' - we have something else in the werks.
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Storyteller, I wasn't crazy about the life might toss bar either, I think I needed to gain steam before I settled into the theme. Much appreciated.
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oats, "The uncomfortable awkwardness of poorly hitting on a chick. That's how I read this, at least, like a stream of consciousness while a dude was nervously running game." it's both fascinating and also reassuring that you got this sensation from both of our verses as a whole. I simply wrote about recent happenings with females and my verse popped out. Thanks.
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Lost in Thought, thanks for checking it out.
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VERITAS, thanks man. Sometimes I think Split is going to take up the mantle once real life sweeps me away from the internet for good. He's got that Autobot spark tbc.
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dead man, thank you professor. High marks from you means a lot.
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Split Eight, thanks for the invite on this one. Keep that fire burning, Quintus.