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Certain Serpent thanks for reading guy. agree I have a habit of rambling, which is why my last five or so drops have been sub 20 lines. I think my last 1/3 made better sense in its original context, but then I fleshed out the middle cause I caught something I liked. In any case, tried to do my best impression of me here. Dont forget that collaboration, either, I might ante up and write first
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Storyteller I'm flattered you think people hold me in high regard lol. I am overzealous. Always appreciate crit/ feed, thanks.
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oats glad you enjoyed it! "Skewered intellectualism" I like it.
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Lost in Thought much appreciated w/ the breakdown. I will leave you some feed today
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VERITAS thanks for reading V. agree, Vulgar bodied the damn thing. Will get one of your more recent pieces.
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dead man gracias for the insight, very perceptive with The Raven line discussion... you always seem to pick up on what in my writing is deep/ thoughtful and what is light/ superficial, in away. Good observation that Vulgar can manage both at the same time. for sure on that collab, lets find a topic of sorts.
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Vulgar dope verse, for real. You matched what I was going for perfectly and added a lot of dimensionality I didn't see in my own stuff, and brought some dope new ideas. Mirin dem multi-layered concepts and wordplay, it was a pleasure.
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The wheels of sexual fulfillment are reliant on the turbine's columns
solutions confusing as Harrison Bergeron's two steps
soon as I reach second base, Lucette gets loose-lipped
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thanks to everyone who fed. will be on the lookout to return favors as always.