[dead man]

seductive is the right adjective. thanks, v

Grope for dated coffee-table novels, we'll awkwardly page through,
Edgar Allan's God was that raven

split, idk how much sense this makes, but your writing is very college campus. well-read and caffeinated. i always get the sense that you're able to express themes of a literary-heavy curriculum in your creative work. it never gets stale because there's always a development from piece to piece.

Got me bottling demons, caught between this magnifying of truth-
-lends some limelit lantern legions, all sing song saying-sooths,

the extra characters were distracting for me but this was one of my favorite couplets. wordplay in the least traditional sense.

Not all these odysseyes follow proper plots like prophecies,

you've been one of my favorite to read from in recent memory. hoping to catch your next open collab if possible.


vulgar of course never ceases to not only amaze but confound. you give us clarity through chaos and 50 tentacles of imagination.

you seemed to focus on a more sexualized course of development. split came out of the gate more soft core. it almost worked on a very literal level in terms of the SMALL TALK title. because there's almost always that period of more subtle flirtation before the physicality can reveal itself. true intentions.

the way you play with words is a source of inspiration for me at times.

an MK-Ultimatum that was icy as Breyers

My passive genes didn't convince Cathleen to go out for decaf with me
Didn't jizz in my pants - I gave GZA my pen

if Bora Bora Bora bores her on a movie date

these are only a few of the quotes i could pull. but these were particularly for their wordplay, like i said. it makes a verse fun to engage and also rewards those who do close reads as opposed to the usual skim..


great work guys. thank you kindly.





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