Cymb....Part of swag and flow is the flow....You were REALLY choppy at parts and had literally no structure yo your rhymes...Some of the swag was good but then again some was lame and kind of 'child ish'...You need to be harsher and stronger with your rhymes..
Nig....Not bad, some really weird lines in there but you kept the flow for the most part and you seemed to have a better grasp on the swag..
V/Nig
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