[Objective]

Pinot Grij: The first paragraph flows well and you introduce your story in a clear way, I like that. LMFAO at the second paragraph where dude talks about this shit. Goddamn, what kinda fetishes does this woman have? I don't even want to know man.. If love makes people blind, this is the definition of it, goddamn, he stupid as hell, lol. Didn't exactly seem realistic that he'd be this stupid, but the story itself did what it was supposed to and you wrote it pretty well. It flowed great throughout and I laughed at how it all came together towards the end. Really well written and it was a pretty funny, yet kinda sad story you presented this week.

Mike Wrecka: Your shit started off funny, then got serious as fuck as it kept going. The complete opposite of what Pinot did. Was refreshing to see two extremely different pieces, yet both of them is creative/original as hell. Don't know if I just didn't really like the fact that his brother was attached to him cuz it's unrealistic, or if I was just creeped out by the whole thing.. Either way, nothing can convince me of anything else than it being creative as fuck and I enjoyed how it all played out. Great visual with the image at the end as well.

Vote: This is hard as fuck.. I felt both were about equal, MW went slightly more abstract whereas Pinot took the humerous route. I can enjoy both, but I can't vote for both, so I got to go with what I enjoy the most in a verse. Personally I enjoy verses to be somehow realistic and presenting some ideas I haven't heard before in a way that captivates me as a reader.

Both of you captivated me with your writing and how you described the shit. I did feel that Pinot was better with his characters and how the story progressed, but it didn't seem realistic at all that someone would be this stupid yet have the intelligence seek advice on taking legal action. I mean, chick be having someones dick in her face and he still believes her lies along with some other crazy as fuck stuff taking place. Don't get me wrong, I thought it was funny, but that's all that it was, you feel me? Almost felt like an filler how it kept going on without anything really happening, if that makes any sense.
MW's piece was overall weird as fuck tbh, but it was something I hadn't read before and shit was creative. I enjoyed the details about how their father had made the stand-up show to make them get through childhood etc., still beats me how they managed to keep it secret for so long and where were their mother in all of this? Either way, overall it was a more serious theme with a captivating story that kept me interested throughout on a different level story-wise than Pinot Grij's verse, so I have to go with MW on this one.

I can definitely see how this could go either way, but to clarify; Mike Wrecka gets my vote.