[Lost in Thought]

to start i'd like to say i like the lengths of you lines.
to me they are very doable on audio, and on here i see alot of peeps whose lines should be broke down to two instead of continuing the length. i myself prefer to keep it short but say wat i need to say... helps the flow a great deal.


And like you said on mine, i liked that you continued your rhyme scheems...
alot of people round here like to do two lines and then stop that rhyme, and it helps to keep the content dope, because you can start the next line based on the next concept, but i think both dragging a concept or even starting a new one with the same rhymes shows a more thought out thought process and i prefer it when im reading stuff.



as for this spit itself, like that you where doing whole line multi's gave it an edge. i do it sometimes, its flex'n your rhyming capablity to do it well, flow, and still keep to a concept. so upps on that.



"i slay rappers commonly, they easily just dead
my brain matter always be the secret to success
so take back ya qualities and leave us to this thread
and say that apology so we can 'just' digress"


would drop that "just" personally, already has enough constitant repitition and multi's to rhyme well, and flows better IMO witout it.



flame opener btw, last stanza kinda slipped. maby lack of understanding but didnt like the last line. good drop overall man