hahahah. wicked man. short and sweet. raelly good scheming with some meaning behind the punches or puns as u say. the content itself was nothing new but yeah the wordplays were cool. im loving the amount of people around this board that DON'T write simple 1 2 word raps or 2 3 syllables.. so sick how much different the landscape is now compared to when i first started this shit. amazing
stay up man. ur style is fun to read, keep readin dudes around here and u will get more polished. u have the raw talent but u seem a little green, and probly greened out too haha
no but like ur vocab is real basic and there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of time put into this. would be dope to see u expand urself and attempt a bit more complex stuff. regardless i like this, stay around
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