[Spoken]

split to be quite honest my friend at times i feel you complex your verse more than it should. just being honest man cause at times im called out on making things seem to just ramble and rhyme.... yet reading your shit is like putting two ideas and meshing and at most times it works and its your thing and it always has been.. this here seemed quite forced man... i aint hating just laying it out cause if i was to honestly say that your verse was fucking FIRE... then i'd be lying and dagel is the king of OM. i have to be straight with you cause i know i always get straight feed yet whenever i see certain names drop verses they get praise instead of criticism and shit that could or would elevate them to a notch higher with

Talking is bargain bin. Go in oh-so prepared,
As faux as my fake-and its opal pro-pylene glare,

seemed highly forced as i loved the idea and concept of it ... it seemd a tad over wordy... i mean as faux as my fake then you cut and trend into a metaphor.... idk maybe its just me being highly tired i just couldnt really vibe into the flow as some words i felt were highly overzealous and thats just my opinion and as its known my opinion aint shit on this site so oh well... but the mechanics and punctuation was there and the emotion was raw as fuck... which i always adore as it sets the certain mood that you would want in reading a verse to me....

vulgar- loved your opener it was a clear and clean metaphor and a little personality in it with the humor but then the next bar reads

Rule 1: Diamond-studded bodysnatchers flock to light like moths
protracting the fact that opportunities fall onto laps: Life might toss

the detail his hard but then the sentencing corrupts the fluidness of the whole sentence with the punction leading into using what life might toss... ok life might toss what?.. the opportunities that are on your lap?... if so how when its on your lap and in rule you would have a chance or a step head cause its on your lap so unless your saying you yourself would fuck up the chance then sure.. i guess like i said idk... maybe its cause i am tired and i aint reading shit right... IDK just being honest on how i feel about each line i read...

but then you go and kill the scene with lines like this

I abided by finite laws; sights set on Dawkin's approved delusional wisdom
I'll tell you what. 'Honesty is the best policy' got me landed in vitruvian prison
coded larynx transmitters, cerebral attachments, all tied into a spire
Relationships didn't wreak from the passion - a One Nightmare Stand,
I stood bright, yet perspired, an MK-Ultimatum that was icy as Breyers
leading Hope Armadas may lead to blindness, hence this conjunctivitis acquired
slurred words perturbed, exchanged with a heavily chlorinated valkryie
My passive genes didn't convince Cathleen to go out for decaf with me
Didn't jizz in my pants - I gave GZA my pen
since intellectual inkwells tend to dry up if verbal swords travel in liquid descent
Mistletoe prickling again. Breast milk sweet, but why the ruthless haste?
if Bora Bora Bora bores her on a movie date

which is just straight coherent with splits verse and it played well and tied into one another and relaly just stood out as a strong segment with great wording and some content that really wits the individual with great knowledge at what the person was doing... anyways Vulgar had the stronger verse but splits own set the mood just right and actually was what gave vulgar a leg up to build off what was so driven with ease for the next to have fornicated and create something even better

ok enough from my stupid tired ass.... i feel this collab as a whole was fucking strong and awesome but as an individual stand point the review i just gave is as stands about them...