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Storyteller: First paragraph flows perfectly and it reads well to me. Gets a bit choppy here and there as you break out of the rhymescheme here and there, but nothing that hurts your verse too much, but enough to be noted.

Overall this was some pretty generic incest story, I feel like it could have been flipped better as the relationship between the characters in the story is pretty bland overall and I feel your interpretation of the topic is a bit loose, but I understand the flip completely and where you were going with it so I salute the psychopathic execution at the end for it. Well done.

Brain Brian: Didn't really like that your title is also the first sentence in your verse, I know it's extreme nitpicking but I gotta be real with you. That was also about the only thing I didn't like about your shit. I thought it was interesting how you chose to go for the Old MacDonald thing and I pondered how you'd flip it, should'a had an idea as it do says had a farm, not has.

Either way, the execution was dope as fuck and I felt you outclassed your opponent when it comes to the topic at hand. I was nodding towards the end at how fucked up shit is. Great use of a picture of McDonalds as well, hah.. Seriously, enjoyed the hell out of your verse.

Vote: Thought both did a great job. Storyteller might have had the better rhymescheme etc., but I felt Brians execution with the topic at hand was done better overall. Definitely enjoyed reading this battle. Keep it up.