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Old 08-14-2013, 10:39 PM   #4
Vulgar
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@Nigma lol this is not what I expected. A cryptic Van Helsing chronicle-like title with a matching piece of art that reminded me of the villain from the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen, set to a customary braggadocio backround. Sweet chin music for the metallic Constantinoples. You have an impressive flow because you approach it with little fear for the consequences of taking risks. Symmetry to you is optional when you can dictate the shape of the rhyme scheme as a whole, trying new things. There is a writer from Project Rhyme who I feel you would learn a lot from reading his work briefly: millz. Your style reminds me of his though you do more battle-related flexes while he usually stuck to traditional topical ventures.

I'll quote some of my favorite bars from this:

Test heart like tweezers and needles, mosquitoes and leeches
From textcee to martyr, you'll bleed for the people to grieve with
^CoHpe.

You claiming superlative master yet you're purely just average
Fuck a courtesy, I blast him.. And nothing triggers insecurity like laughter
^Pretty rugged.

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