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Old 08-14-2013, 06:26 AM   #10
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There's really not a whole lot to say. This was sick all the way through. I loved "Wookie-embedded Michener." Unlike a lot of these pieces, the abstractions really made sense and connected seamlessly, and I think a lot of that has to do with flipping between really dense verbiage and simple lines like the one about "calling kids pussies." The first stanza had the best flow, but the third was just fire on every line.

As far as flexes go, this was terrific.
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