Bleak
If my goons're lurkin, this dude'll get rattled quick.
When I sent these bombs at S9, I quickly sunk his battleship
Ok, but it could have hit harder with better wording
Gotta squad of hoods, who crack 9's till their wrists ache.
While your team consists of a closet dweller named Split 8
Ok
I'll beat you with a quick key, with not an effort exerted.
Namix can't tell you how to beat ME in these lessons you're learning.
Meh..
You wanted someone your level? But you knew you're dead.
My league's sign ups closed when you viewed the thread.
Meh..
hopped on namix quick, cause he's teaching some rules for landing.
But truly, he thought Cross-Training was a school for trannies.
Ok
bleak, you appear to have decent concepts but ur wording makes many of your punches come off as statementish. If you changed that, more of ur punches would hit.
Sharp Nine
make up ya mind dude, pick a title to define you
Ironic...
You can't get behind a Username, but you'd let him get behind you
Decent
I'll set the club scene on fire w/ a peformance 'a skill
He tried that^, n people were fleeing like that joint in brazil
Cool concept
Your face looks like a football. I'm Flacco in the pocket, son
I get first downs baby... look like you got the genes to have one
Decent
You a joke, bro. Real talk, it's no secret
Think you're nice? Nah, but you should try biting like he did
Don't know Nice, but the idea is okay
Guy's got a big head, so I'll smite this clown
No one netcee's future was bleak til the site went down
Wording was weird and really hurt this punch...
S9, you came decently consistent. Your wording hurt you as well, but it looks as though it could have been a typo.
Overall, I have to give this to S9. He came more consistently, and it really helped him gain the edge in the battle.
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