I throw shit at ya so quick, ya aint gonna see a catch like getting’ free shit!
pull S.D's card so hard he won’t remember me like removing a phone memory chip!
that setup was mad awkward. SD card was a good idea but it wasn't really turned into the banger it had the potential for
Ya a scrub, so if this Chess imma King, and this faggot Pawn’s soft
So watch as I cut ‘shotgun in half’ like im fuckin’ sawn off!
his name is shogun dinero. shogun. you flipped a completely different name
Ya know can’t see me since I’m out of ya sight like a star all day
Ya tryin to land shots, but a Shotgun can’t hit a target that’s far away
again, shogun
I leave no Dinero Left, like a bill from the hospital after getting’ ya skull broken, might
So, When I start pressin, ya fold quick so Dinero givin’ up like Poker Night!
reaaaaally awkard setup. and that punchline coulda been pretty cool but ended up again pretty awkward due to bad excecution
Win? Creating an alias n’ voting for himself is the only way this Fake’ll grab it!
This dudes weak, I’m through with Gamble-quick like breaking a habit!
the concept was okay but basic, passable for a newb tourney but the way it was done was bad
some general stuff:
i know you go for double-punch, but you dont really have a good punchline in any setup. like that thing about him voting for himself. it happened, sure, and its a workable concept but you just kind of reminded us it happened. didnt really do anything good with it. and for real, get the other guy's name right for a battle. those shotgun bars were big misses that couldve been avoided easily.
Ever since NC has been restored i been thinking, aint it a fact?...
That this guy was history w/ what Lama deleted - even God couldn't save u from that...
kinda scattered/not too direct
In fact, just look... U could tell hes the type to go taddle....
Shit, it dont take much to see Ani lies in his raps - just read what he writes in a battle...
alright attempt
You could act wreckless all you want, but it wont stop the cancer from coming...
You could see from his handle on things he's no A.I, so i tell em like... An, sir... violence is NOT the answer you wantin'...
waaaaay too stretched
For your death you'll pay a large price, so they'll be a major cost involved...
Must not have your eye on the prize.. cuz we wont have to play golf to see - T off the ball...
kind of worked but the flip didnt really work both ways.
I serve this bitch before I deliver the rest - this pest like home fries...
He's just an actor tryna rap - and one punch'll have Mos Def, from both sides...
i dont know why i see so many of this concept, but i do
except for that answer line it all read kind of smoothly, but it really wasnt too direct. wording hurt you a good deal
these kinda battles are always hard to judge... i had ani with two decent attempts in SD card and poker night and gamble's was ani lies... gamble probably did his the best but the flip was a pretty basic and not too effective. close, but i edge it to animoisty for more/better attempts
v/animosity
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