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Originally Posted by Malachi

@CymbiCort

Yo im a kid but not near this lamest of the lames, christ!
Is this nigga cym, 3? guess im gon beat that game twice
> nigga u can't beat Sims 3. Sims 3 beats you. Also meh,
He be on my dick hard, you can tell hes a freaking coward
You know this nigga gay, when mal cum around he be screaming black power
> dope concept kinda? Ur sayin he's gay for you? Also didnt work both ways
Im always next to pussy its a known fact u fuckin bum
If any body lickin cym balls its a special ed kid playin drums
>lmao. but played
The chicks he pull are ugly and got acne, jeez
IF i ever said simpulltens its a shot at his personality
> this was dope but could use work on wording
Your shits wack man you gotta be doin this shit on purpose
Boredom crushed you, now you know what its like reading one of ya verses
> dope personal even tho it's simple
My game brings the fire and his is like luke warm, the poor guy...
but really, youd have to visit Miami to see any heat at courtside
>good but didnt hit too hard cus you had 3x pussy bars

Word, you need
1) MORE angles with your name flips. everything that wasnt a name flip, was simple
2) less name flips, they really get old. It's still a personal attack even if u don't have their name in the bar
3) wording... It's pretty smooth reading, but your punches don't really work both ways, I.e. it reads as a statement and a personal attack... If that makes sense

Originally Posted by CymbiCort

that diss isn't hard bro...ask me what i think of this broad yo
I'll respond like bruno cuz "yeah, i'd tea bag M' for the award, sho"
> didnt like.
My styles stick like snot from ya nose, i'm knockin ya hoes
You couldn't be wit cym's, son watchin that show
>didnt hit hard
i got the type of rhyme that lures a plagiarist
Ya record got more L's than lifestyles of da poor and dangerous
> eh, bad but ok
I ain't gay so trust me chicks pay me to bang some nuts...
Cuz C straight unlike u after u snort angeldust
>self name flips still wack
put a pound thru ya tissue, n let rounds sink down to ur ribs dude
Without walkin away from the T.V. to leave mal calm in the middle
>ok nice

Cym's only good bar was his last one. Simpleton and Boredom easily took this. CYM was too complicated and not hard hitting enough, Malachi needs some fine tuning and better angles but clearly beat Cym here


V/ malachi