Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
Idk.. its like your trying to win and you just dissed yourself
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
cool little jab
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
Okay jab
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
Not really strong
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either
No.. just weak closer.
You need to work on elevating punches to more out of box and creative to hit harder. Setups could use a little ante up too
Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
Good little opener
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
okay jab
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
Again, decent jab
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
LOL.. made me laugh, basic and to point
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut
Not really feeling this closer
Your shits decent, however, not really liking the single-syllable ending rhymes. Your closer was the weakest as it seems you slacked. You took this with consistent hits (aside from last bar).
Vote: Utmost
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