CYM 3 was a legit attempt but didn't work
Again your mal cum line is a legit attempt an misses... You've got ya word flip but it dont work both ways or it does but not insulting... So he sees Malcolm he says black power. Ok. He sees you cum, set up is he's gay, how does him shouting black power deliver the sting?
Ok the CYM balls is a played hit on him however you came fresh with it and I really liked this, had the lol factor an was worded lovely IMO
Cynpultens is solid, first line set up where it was going an the name flip hits smooth.
Boredom line hits but don't think I'd quote, too played
Your close seemed forced with the poor guy finish and the punch wasn't very directed but a legit attempt all the same
CYM I liked your opener but felt forced an could of been worded to hit harder but was a legit an fresh attempt
Lol your Simpsons line works as a wordflip but didn't hit....at all IMO
Meh the ls lifestyle line was so so I didn't really enjoy it
Your nameflipping yourself again? You should be using his man. An again this line did nothing for me, but it's a legit attempt, actually quite creative compared to your others but wasn't hard hitting IMO
Ok mal calm inthe middle was ya first legit name flip with a nice concept but again no sting unless I'm
Missing something your leaving him calm in the middle.... Not really seeing the punch in this
Voting mal for the hardest hits of the match with CYM balls and cympultens
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