Wow!!! ... nice piece ... was confused about the cypher content at the first. 3bars but as I kept on reading,I had to skim back to the top to really appreciate it.
Moreover, the diction and expression used was just top notch, a quotable line every 2bars
all those cracks in the sidewalk, holes to
make whole again
how many apologies does it take to pave
over them?
though I wonder - if those cracks exist as
regrets that I forgot her
will new ones emerge if I forget that I
forgot her?
Lessons I've been taught from every hour
consumed -
Perhaps the cracks are just room for roots
so the flowers can bloom is present
^^
This stanza impressed me a great deal ... dope verse Mr oats
Just a noob casting his two cents
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