Very enjoyable battle boys and boys. Both verses conceptually were extremely dope, both had equally strong flow and each had content to simmer and only get better in time. I honestly feel you both should win, I've only read a few verses this week cuz I been busy but these were the best of what I've read by far including my weak drop. I like Serpents direction, very thought provoking but for what it was, it left me wanting more. I think adding another stanza or two even with more thoughts on the state of our art would have been dope. There are plenty more bars to be writen about this. One thing I will say, is although the lines were original to me, the concept was not. also loved the humorous ending. Mike on the other hand came original all the way through. Come to think of it Mike this is one of my top 2 favorite verses from you. Flow wise and content wise this shit was butter.
v/Mike
Very close, two extremely well written verses. In the end, Mike's was too original for me not to give it to him. Don't kill me CS haha
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