[Adonis]

Quick...apologies

I liked J's verse, it was way to short but considering the content making it longer would most likely make it whack. Obviously a key, but flow was nice which carried a lack of originality or concept in general. Veritas also came short, but had some nice thought provoking lines. Both verses are well bellow your normal talent level but not awful reads either.

V/Veritas

More thought provoking then J