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Old 08-11-2013, 12:36 PM   #12
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Certain Serpent: This was supposed to be a collabo, no? That's the only thing I question to be honest. It seems to me you kinda went against Pat's verse and talked against the canadian or something, you know? Don't think you would have done that in a regular collabo, but whatevs, it wasn't completely off-topic and you kept it going. Definitely enjoyed the verse as a whole, thought this was dope and could also serve as a stand alone piece in your collection of writtens. I enjoyed the rhymescheme you went with and felt it was feeding off the same scheme to the piece you was given which is a huge plus, give an edge to the collabo-feel. Overall a decent verse with a couple questionable things in terms of the ''task'', but nothing that hurt you badly as you did well in other aspects of your verse. Keep it up.

Mike Wrecka: Didn't really see the ''hypothetical collabo'' here other than you using Pat's topic to start writing your own shit with. There's some connections that can be made, but nothing outstanding. That being said it puts you and Serpent equal as far as the topic goes imho. The content however was dope and I truly enjoyed how you went along with your verse all the way to the end. The flow was on par and the scheme was dope, also here I feel it's even between you and Serpent. I also enjoyed the pace and progression of your verse throughout.

Vote: I thought this was awefully close and I enjoyed reading both of these writers verses alltho' I had slight problems to fully connect them with the task at hand. Either way, both had funny elements in each of their verses and it flowed and read well. After reading both of the verses again I feel like I got to give my vote based on the content, creativity and the piece as a whole. I felt MW slightly edged it in terms of creativity and execution as I've seen variations of the topics Serpent touched before. Overall it was a pretty dope entertaining battle and kudos to both writers.

To clarify; MVGT MW
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