sick battle guys.
lars - impressive verse. I like how you kept the same rhyme strand going for a while. im a big fan of that and you did it well here. very thought provoking verse that went extremely well with the original. good stuff
rawn - a very good verse here. good mechanics good rhyme scheme. also thought provoking and went with vulgars very well. sorry bout the quick vote but I just read these and really enjoyed them and said I have to vote despite being in a rush.
both competitors went in the exact same direction and they both executed extremely well. I think flow and mechanics are equal here. these were two very good verses. props guys. im gonna go with the one that I found ever so slightly more interesting and that was
vote- brian bryan
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