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Adonis · 08-10-2013, 11:04 PM

I'm going to give this to Teller although I wasn't fond of either. Both seemed rushed, although teller had better schemes as far as flow. Neither story was very deep or anything and I blame that on the awful topic given. All in all story's entire verse to me was just slightly better IMO.

08-10-2013, 11:04 PM	#10
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	I'm going to give this to Teller although I wasn't fond of either. Both seemed rushed, although teller had better schemes as far as flow. Neither story was very deep or anything and I blame that on the awful topic given. All in all story's entire verse to me was just slightly better IMO. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR